Sorry I've been MIA, but I've been working on this.
==STORY SYNOPSISRuth Rosewood is just another member of a typical, middle class Victorian society until a vengeful ghost traps her inside the haunted halls of the Valiard Mansion. Only one spell can set her free, and only three people believe she can still be saved—her childhood sweetheart Theodore, her best friend Gangfield and her little brother Adam.To find the spell, Theodore, Gangfield and Adam set off to traverse the dangerous past of an ancient magician, while Ruth must fight to keep her sanity in the all-consuming realm of the forgotten dead.
I decided to end the test run of Chapter 1. Now it's time to submit the thing for real. Bunch of changes made in response to reader feedback and crits.
So if you've read the previous version, please read this one before you keep reading with Chapter 2. THIS IS A WORK IN PROGRESS
I will continually be making more drawings, adding colour and working on the layout. The idea is to get feedback on the core story before spending hundreds of hours on illustrations and concepts I might end up abandoning.If you enjoyed reading this, please let me know!
I'm very happy to receive any crits, but I want to know if I'm doing anything right, too!
But, as always, ANY AND ALL FEEDBACK IS WELCOME!!
Thanks for everything, guys!!
Your feedback is incredible! Thanks so much!!!!
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